translucently illuminated

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Crayon, Sep 28, 2004.

  1. Crayon

    Crayon Member

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    the time between two beats of one heart
    is all it takes
    to make us realize
    weeds die young

    a solilique
    written translucent
    comes to earth
    in the mid june sun

    illuminated
    this day I came to light

    Why persist in fear
    of things we can not see?
    they have proven themselves to be
    the finest luxuries

    warmth came again
    and now
    I can light a match
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    the time between two beats of one heart
    is all it takes

    ~* bright and precise is its merging dissolution,
    a creative spark fanned manifold.
     
  3. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    i realy liked that, didn't realy understand it,, but i sure liked it
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I hear meloncholy here, especially last stanza....I liked this as well, it affected my mood.
     
  5. skyfire

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    i just love ur title...its a good title...
     
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