too far gone

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by reeddollaz, Nov 20, 2007.

  1. reeddollaz

    reeddollaz Member

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    my worlds torn apart
    nobody to turn to
    everybody is gone
    family remains
    but so far im still lost

    no friends, i lost my love
    why live on
    when i have nothing to give
    no answers for my feelings
    just grief, i envy younger little kids

    i wish life would restart
    give me a fresh slate
    its to far now to turn back
    ive already concealed my fate

    to cowardly to slit my wrist
    not courageous enough to shoot
    my life ending would be happiness
    but to much grief for the rest

    i feel apathy for those
    the ones who would lose me
    but if i feel i have something to lose
    why am u losing?

    im alone, nowhere to turn
    everyone is gone
    my wife, friends, family is torn
    i dont see myself moving on

    one question
    my last breath utters one thing
    why is it worth living?
    when so far ive gone, and gained nothing.

    what to do.
    where to go.
    i cant ask for help
    it seems hopeless
    nobody understands the stress ive felt

    there is no rythym.
    there is no rhyme.
    all i ask in my last breath
    what shall i do, with my remaining time?

    answer this
    you may save a life
    unanswered questions remain a mystery in time
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    "unanswered questions remain a mystery in time" i love that.

    good job keep writing i look forward to more from you.

    May peace and love find you
    Amber
     
  3. reeddollaz

    reeddollaz Member

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    thank you. i usually try to write songs (hip hop/rap) but i went ahead and trieds some poetry one night. i was obviously down and out. i wrote it literally in 2 minutes or less.
     
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