tick tock

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by wild.flower, Feb 9, 2005.

  1. wild.flower

    wild.flower Member

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    tick tock
    second hand
    s...l...o...w...l...y
    moves around the clock
    move...stop...move...stop
    tick...tock...tick...tock
    in a never-ending-always-moving-cycle
    in the same-continuing-never-changing-pattern
    i wonder if the second hand
    ever gets bored
    we should throw some variety
    into its life
     
  2. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    neat approach. :)
     
  3. wild.flower

    wild.flower Member

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    :) thanks. i was experimenting. i'm glad you like it!!
     
  4. BraveSirRubin

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  5. wild.flower

    wild.flower Member

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    Hmm...why is it shit?
     
  6. _chris_

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    He slags off all the poems, dont take him seriously. I like it anyway
     
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