thoughts splattered on the wall

thoughts splattered on the wall
climbing up the escape ladder
the hideousness of the human race
as it comes down from on high
to mingle and to redeem itself
planting daisies behind your ears
and understanding all you perceive here
thus, exploiting my privacy
all hail to the obtainable knowledge
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good rythym and rhyming, something I have to work really hard at and you make it sound like you made it up on the spot

 

yeah, i did make it up on the spot.
it was about ah say, six months ago, maybe.

 

good work. keep on writing,look forward to reading more

 

thanks i will keep writing.