This is by my friend

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by moonbeam, Jun 15, 2004.

  1. moonbeam

    moonbeam Member

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    poem #1:

    love is like a dark sorceress
    conquering the spaces left open by
    the lesser ones

    and eternity is thrown unto
    yesterday
    put somewhere unknown
    and exposed slightly to our
    greatest demons


    poem #2:

    Creatures carved in plush solidity
    struggling to preserve the serenity
    coveted the day before
    No one knows how long they may push
    their hardened souls into buckets of rain.


    Theyre by my friend, i repeat. But you can still tell me what you think...
     
  2. Bro_Rific

    Bro_Rific Banned

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    I'm not sure what to think. Let me toke on this crack pipe and I'll get back to you. K?
     
  3. moonbeam

    moonbeam Member

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    what the hell does that mean man? just kidding...but really, what does that mean?
     
  4. Bro_Rific

    Bro_Rific Banned

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    It just means I think I have to be fucked up to understand it.
     
  5. moonbeam

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    oh okay. i see now.
    anyone else?
     
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