The Trap

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by myself, Jul 27, 2006.

  1. myself

    myself just me

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    For so many years

    I’ve watched so many lovers

    Never thought I’d ever

    Fall myself into this




    I try to analyse

    I try to understand




    It seems to me there’s something

    Then it seems to me it’s not




    It’s too slippery

    Or maybe it’s only playing with me




    It’s too risky, I know

    Yet I am too curious

    To leave it alone




    Was it a trap you’ve set for me?

    Will you ever set me free?
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi
    lovely piece, questioning
    what you do....or anyone will do
    to trust..your choices thats all

    to trust love a lover and yourself......

    keep reaching keep writing
    lovenpeace from saff

    best part for me
    [its too slippery
    or maybe its only playing with me.....
    reminds me of talking heads... slippery people...track.
     
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