the River Said...

What a crazy place to be,
this variable Monday afternoon.
Everything is wild, descriptive,
and pure.
I'm rappin' to the open air
like mad, and singin' songs.
Smilin' to myself,
everything is pure.

Where does the body
go from here?
Home, to sleep
in cotton cozy.
The mind goes
trippin' thru the
cosmos and back.

The spirit rides the
sky, as always.

Everything follows the path,
in waves,
travellin' the speed of
Sound.

Furiously groovin' to the
sound of Mother Nature,
creating her art as she
carves the ground.

-I hug you now, in the murky
water, waist deep and warm!

-I baptize you in the name of
the Sun and the Holy Buddha!

Diving into Heaven with
feet gently kicking,
arms idly rowing,
body freely floating,
I'm home.

Flowing downstream,
I'm drowning,
and I don't even care.

 

Very good, makes me want to go out side and breathe in the night

 

The last two lines kind of threw me off, but again, I do love your style and the imagery is great!

 

Maybe he's drowning in the bounty of life? He's going with the flow so well he's lost in it, very nice. Either way, this is a hell of a poem dude, has the spirit of the river all the way through it.

 

Exactly, dude! You got it, right there, yeah! Thanks a lot, man, that was an awesome compliment, hehe. I'm real glad you enjoyed it. Glad to see you guys enjoyed it.

 

I love this one... this is my favorite out of the recent poems so far. It's uplifting and dancey when you read it aloud. And you have a gift for description

 

yes great piece...how i tingle after reading this poem
this openess to life ,to living, to wondering ,to learning.

let me flow also....

love npeace from saff

 

Thank you, Saffron and Apples, I enjoyed your comments very much.

 

very nice... i like it

 

hey man! cool poem
all your poems were always so cool, i haven't read one in a whilee, and reading this now it's neat how your poems have bloomed =P inbloom!!
im on my way to post some of my own too now, check the poetry forums~
peace bro

 

I really llike this beautiful description of nature and the feeling of this poem.

 

Thnak you guys all very much. I'm always so joyed to see people digging the poems that mean so much to me.

Peace and Love

 

This is a really great poem. It makes me want to go dance outside or explore a forest or something. It`s descriptive in the way that you can actually feel that warm murky water or the cozy cotton instead of just imagining it.

 

wow this is something special

love the imagery and the way you brought feeling, sound, and movement into the poem.

When read out loud you poem has a way of dragging me in as though i'm going through it. Fantastic!

 

Awww, you guys, it makes me so happy to see everyone feel such emotion from this poem. This one is a particular favourite of mine, as well. Glad you guys liked it.

Peace and Love