the positve,it may be alone..

for all.

imprisioned,we are not free
like lovers light drifting
an ocean ,dripping in war
i shift alter shelter no more.
what transparent skin will
cover lieing to all.
alone the positive stands.

alone we all are,with
energy to lick our thoughts
confind bodies upon golden
blood stained shores.
do crave ,longing to dive
among tender humans once
again,my twisted words do fly.

alone in flight, positive
tears to drip from eye.
a path so chosen,delicate
steps,to trample capitalists
yes, whilst they wept.
alone in darkness,ripples
calm.yet sudden change
will alter all.
alone no more the positive
smiles.
awaken to reality
this world is ours.......

lovenpeace from saff.

its time to take the stand
all humans to take back what
the governemtns have done
to so many..now ..is the era now...

 

I really enjoyed this Saff.

Great writing. Keep up the good work.

Peace,
Aidan

 

I like your writing and your ending idea, I'm in the same battle with others. People are responsible, very true, and they need to awaken to that responsibility.