the path

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Maundrell, Jul 7, 2007.

  1. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    As I awake from my slumber
    looking around for assurance.
    Opening my door to breath the morning air.
    Strolling down the road out of town
    a sign to the left saying "the path to light."
    How could I resist such a obscure quote?
    Widening my eyes seeing nothing ahead.
    A breeze of mist fills the air that settles on the path
    telling me to carry on with the great journey.
     
  2. Lizardd

    Lizardd Member

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    Nicely done. It feels very inspired.
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  3. RexLee

    RexLee Banned

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    very enjoyanble
     
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