The Last Sunset

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Broad_For_Hire, Aug 14, 2004.

  1. Broad_For_Hire

    Broad_For_Hire Member

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    The tightest grip
    Clinging, gravity forbiding
    my quick descent.
    Unwilling to reveal
    my muscles, blushing.
    So that I may carry myself
    on as a tired girl,
    And mask my strength.

    Tiny eruptions,
    My tendons don't snap.
    They are as stretched as my will
    to hang on the edge.
    Awaiting a grip,
    stonger than my
    fake straining fists-
    To let me rise
    onto the earth,
    and out of the sky.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    powerful emerging imagery is what i see here.
     
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