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the inside of me

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Oct 5, 2004.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    the inside of me
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    it's proper eyes that have to see
    what the effect is on the inside
    i don't want to give up this belief
    this thing that has now become
    such a huge part of the inside of me
    i'm so amazed in the maze of you
    the walls aren't wide enough to handle two
    i want to scream on the outside inside
    but their ears aren't as delayed like mine
    i'll have to scream on the inside of me
    i want to wither and age in your embrace
    i want to always look in your beautiful face
    i want you to always be an integral part
    the most important factor on the inside of me



    it's weird to let your brain go and just write stuff...i'm weird. >.<
     
    inbloom, Oct 5, 2004
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  3. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    i'm so amazed in the maze of you
    the walls aren't wide enough to handle two
    i want to scream on the outside inside

    that's my favorite part.
    awesome, i love it. it's blunt, but in a soft metaphoric way :)
     
    lucyinthesky, Oct 5, 2004
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  5. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    that's how all my shit is, and that's why it never makes sense. :eek:
     
    lucyinthesky, Oct 5, 2004
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  7. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Your guys' threads always feel like a public display of affection, I feel like a third wheel or an intruder replying here.
     
    KittenX, Oct 5, 2004
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  9. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Great line. The essence of commitment, growing old together ... yet as Kahlil Gibran states in "The Prophet" 'On Marriage' (lets the winds of heaven dance between you).
     
    sylvanlightning, Oct 5, 2004
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  11. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    then don't. :rolleyes:
     
    lucyinthesky, Oct 5, 2004
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  13. Drifter

    Drifter Member

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    im a wolf that loves tigers and im plagued by spiders...then dont.
     
    Drifter, Oct 5, 2004
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  15. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    *shrugs*

    Aight. Just voicing my opinion. Thanks for the eye rolling.
     
    KittenX, Oct 5, 2004
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