The Death of Me

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by WoodstockChild, Dec 15, 2006.

  1. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    Lets see how many people can figure this one out =] It's all symbolic.

    The Death of Me


    I once met a girl

    Her name was Lady Savior.

    Her eyes shone with a hypnotic light of false hope as she spoke of a peace imaginable only in dreams.

    My heart was broken.

    I needed peace.

    I couldn’t help but listen.

    Like a Siren she sang to me

    And like a sailor I was deceived by the beauty of her song.

    Like the pied piper she led me

    And like a robber she blinded me.

    But my heart was broken.

    I needed peace.

    I couldn’t help but follow.

    In return for my soul she promised me the peace I so zealously sought.

    I didn’t fully believe her, so I graciously accepted her gift.

    She brought me peace, she brought me pain

    But I should’ve believed her

    It should’ve crossed my mind

    But it didn’t.

    She led me to the river and I drowned there while she took my soul

    Then everything was gone.
     
  2. L.A.Matthews

    L.A.Matthews Senior Member

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  3. athena_skye

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    Uhm, does this have anything to do with those people who are always on shows like "Maury" because thier b/f beats them -and at the end of it all, they are all "but I still love him!" and the audience is like "oh lady, get a grip on reality already!"
    Is it anything like that ??
     
  4. ConeyIslandOfTheMind

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    That part's a bit confusing.

    To speak of it in literal terms, the speaker didn't believe that she would take his/her soul, or that she would keep her promise of peace?

    I know it's poetry, and it doesn't have to reek of clarity, but I would try to clear that part up if I were you.

    Otherwise, it's a very good poem. I saw God or some form of religion.
     
  5. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    That is what I meant.
    It's about drugs. The name Lady Savior was sort of an alias for the drug I chose to personify.
     
  6. L.A.Matthews

    L.A.Matthews Senior Member

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    It's pretty obvious and clichéd.
     
  7. las puertas

    las puertas Member

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    :cheers:
     
  8. TopNotchStoner

    TopNotchStoner Georgia Homegrown

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    Sounds like heroin to me.
     
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