The baby that shouldn't be

I have been writing Poem's since i was 14 year's old, and i have ton's of them.
It has been my excape to write what was ever on my mind, and be able to vent
without anyone else knowing about what i wrote about.
I hide my meaning's in my poem, and unless you are a person who know's me
or my problem's, you would never know what it would mean.
In this one you get a idea, but you can leave the rest to imagination.
Here it is.let me know what you think.

"The baby that shouldn't exsist"​

6/10/2007​

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Im the baby that shouldn't exsist​

A mistake, A Bast%$d, The circumstaines Consist​

I am the Product of a Relationship Gone wrong​

Out of everyone, im the only one holding on​

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My heart has started to beat​

Before a peep, whisper, or word​

But now everyone want's me gone​

and Vanished from this world​

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Im the baby that should'nt exsist​

My future so unclear​

The Question's Prosist​

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It's me growing inside​

Hearing all that is going on​

Bring's tear's to my eye's​

but yet i hold on​

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Why did you bring me hear​

to vanish me from this world?​

do you hate me ?​

or only the person i live inside?​

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From someone not old enough to talk​

from someone not old enough to speak ​

from someone whos first name is (It) that's me!​

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Im youre iligitament daughter​

could have been youre son​

Im a loner in this world yet​

cause my fait hasn't come​

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Im a statistic​

of what could go wrong​

between 2 people who become lonley​

One night of lust is gone​

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Im that pregnancy test ​

you don't want to believe​

Followed by painful emotions​

of your best friend's husband​

in which you concieved​

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Im that wiggle in your tummy​

when everyone's in bed​

Im what keep's you awake at night​

with all those mixed emotion's in your head​

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Im hear now mommy​

or should i call you mom?​

It's just you and me now​

The complacation's have spung​

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Ill be hear soon​

You just wait and see​

Ill be the most Beautiful baby​

the baby that shouldnt be​

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Just believe in me​

and ill get you thru​

What started out as a mistake​

can turn into a renew​

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Just turn to me​

and keep me warm​

Im not just a mistake anymore​

Im your newborn"​

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Chrissy Lynn 2007​

 

That's a really well developed piece. I particularly like:

"I'm a statistic
of what could go wrong
between 2 people who become lonely [check sp in the piece]"

Fantastic work.

 

its very deep. i really like it

 

Wow. Just... that was great. Honestly. Good work.

 

Wow..... that was just amazing I love it.

 

thank you very much, i give alot of thought to what im writing, and what i write come's from my soul. It has alway's come naturely to me!

By the way? what is (sp)?

 

Well done...!

 

That really hits close to home. Great, deep pooetry.

 

very very very great poem very deep

 

thank you very much, im thinking of pubishing some of my poem's you think i have a chance to make it?

 

what are the others like? if you have a good mix of short and narrative poems, and if the poems are about a variety of subject and not just you, than you may

 

That was so deep that it gave me goosebumps. I felt you anger and your pain. Excellent piece! I hope that things turn from dark to light for you.

 

I write about whatever is on my mind really, it doesn't have to be about me,
i write about whatever i see, like i was shopping yesterday and as i was getting in my truck, i seen one of those white sea gals that sometime's find there way into store parking lot's and just hang there, well i seen it come down and take a drink from a puddle, and i thought to myself, " I could write about something like that, about man and his munipulation on nature, from store's going up, and contruction all around, but that poem isn't on the tip of my tounge yet, i wait till it is nice and built up before i start writing.

Sure i can post a couple more...

Ill post them on the main board.....thanks.

 

Wow, while delving into all the work that was posted here before I joined the forum, I found this. Absolutely mezmerising. It has left me, like all great poems, with a lot to think about.


Peace,
Aidan.

P.S. (Sp) is spelling, I think.

 

I'm crying.....

 

wow

It is very raw and heartfelt. I like it

 

I know exactly what you're talking about, and I love your poem! It's deep, and puts all your emotions out there...keep writing!

 

great job!

 

I printed this out and gave it to a good friend who's expecting a 'surprise' baby. She was having a lot of doubts about her decision to keep the baby. When she read it, she cried and cried. She finally realised that she had done the right (for herself). Thanks again for this beautiful poem.


Peace,
Aidan.

 

That was amazing, I loved it. Makes you think twice about what you would do if you were ever in that situation. Beautiful