Teenage Photograph

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Spyder, Apr 13, 2005.

  1. Spyder

    Spyder La dah de dah

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    Wave your hand girl
    over your forehead
    with your blonde hair trailing behind
    your bare shoulders.
    Your eyes pour the dissolution
    of timeless soulful loss.
    You've lost yourself, with strangers
    in the background
    and framed you hold beauty
    as endless despair.

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    Photograph by Joseph Szabo
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I love love love stuff like this! Great poem, great picture, and both together take it to new heights, which is exactly what should be happening. Perfecto! Thanks for sharing this, it really makes me want to kick my artist friend in the butt and hurry up and give me stuff :)

    btw, did you take the picture?
     
  3. Spyder

    Spyder La dah de dah

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  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Ingenious. Absolutely loved it.
     
  5. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Excellent response to a great photo :)
     
  6. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi there
    just spotted this

    as above this is wonderful. what a formation of emotions
    set around the whole focus of the photo.......

    yet i would have to add...

    a pause , endless despair
    awakens where you are...

    lovenpeace from saff
     
  7. me_and_harpua

    me_and_harpua Member

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    trite bullshit........you guys praise this same old "despair" shit every time it comes up.....its crap....
     
  8. Spyder

    Spyder La dah de dah

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    why thank you soooo much!

    i enjoy all critisism

    but would you care to accually comment "why" ...lets atleast make your post vaguely interlectual...
     
  9. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    Wow, now this is poetry! This would make Jim Morrison proud!! You should write a book! You have a talent, dont let it go to waste!
     
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