StickyPo(oh)etry

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They live in a world where Santa is Hitler
and we throw the switch in the gas-chamber of their winter
Those were your best two lines- but sheesh, this nic you've got! GAD!

 

Thanks kidder, you're a sweetie!!

 

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bravo! that's simply amazing! 5 gold stars for you, for that alone!

 

Thank you, my friend.
I'm new here, and haven't encountered this 5star thing yet, but I honestly believe that anyone who posts in this lovely forum should get at least 5 stars (after every word!) Isn't it just so fantastic that people can inspire each other in this way? Pass it on!!

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i really enjoyed all of these...you have excellent cadence...will look for more...

 

Thank you skyfire, and just because you're beautiful...

 

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You're writing is pure joy to read, superb wordplay! "One for the Guise", again, is full of stellar lines "mothers of un-invention" ... "wacko-wax" ... "anti-love brigade" are just a few of my favorites... but it was this whole stanza that was my favorite, simply because it brings everything together:

 

Thanks again, matey! I just feel so lucky to be open to all the inspiration i'm getting at the moment!!


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Agree with fulmah -ONE FOR THE GUISE- *applauds* Awesome stuff, so original...made me grin.

 

Thank you for sharing your visions. Sometimes side-splitting and then you go both deep and high simultaneously. Well done... thank you for these gifts of presence. I enjoyed re-reading your offerings, its a treasure of chaos to find what you thought you'd find, changed into another now.

 

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This one made me laugh... spectacular sarcasm edging it's way into a deeper message, and the perfect length for delivery of that message, as well. I really love your wordplay as well, the creativity in many of your lines. thanks for a great read!

hehe... what a great line...