Ok I decided to write my own book. And I am writing it here. Please no one still my story or my ideas. But if you wish to read you can. My story is going to be about a group of witch friends, and well if you wish read on. Possible Names Females Alice Parker - main character - witch Catherine Elysant -friend - witch Winnifred (Winny) Overton - friend - witch Bridget Richmond - friend - witch Stacey Lawrence - Charity Savary - Evil Woman Margaret Cardwell - Headmistress Isabel Barton - Teacher Judith Howard - School Nurse / Counselor Britney Hansen - mean chicks friend Krista Marsh - main popular chick Jordan Helzer - main popular chicks sidekick Jessica Hunter - very unpopular girl Emma - Male Calibor Trivett - main evil guy Jake Smith - janitor Brett Simonton - guy friend Drake Baldwin - Alice's boyfriend Neville Emerson - guy friend Seth Places and rooms in the story. School/Castle Rooms Girls Dorm Cafeteria Chapel Headmistress Office Bathrooms Hidden Room (Hang out) Hidden Hallways Art Room History Room Hallway Hospital Grounds Lake Forest Forest clearing Shack in woods Other Places Alice's Home Ancient Burial Ground Different Castle hidden in woods Ok I will add or change this later on.
Possible Names Females Alice Parker - main character - witch - nice but can be mean - Long strait Blond Hair, Green eyes, Mark on neck, very good looking, age 17 Powers - moves things with mind Catherine Elysant -friend - witch - Long straight black Hair, Green dark eyes, short, mark on hip, doesn't care what anyone thinks, is secretly bisexual, age 17 Powers - freezes time in the room she is in Winnifred (Winny) Overton - friend - witch - Long red hair, Green eyes, mark on wrist, pretty, tall, Smart, age 17 Powers - Starts fire with her mind Bridget Richmond - friend - witch - Mean tough loyal - shoulder length Brown Hair, Green Eyes, strong, mark on shoulder age 17 Powers - Can heal Stacey Lawrence - Charity Savary - Evil Woman Margaret Cardwell - Headmistress Isabel Barton - Teacher Judith Howard - School Nurse / Counselor Britney Hansen - mean chicks friend Krista Marsh - main popular chick Jordan Helzer - main popular chicks sidekick Jessica Hunter - very unpopular girl Emma - Male Calibor Trivett - main evil guy Jake Smith - janitor Brett Simonton - guy friend Drake Baldwin - Alice's boyfriend Neville Emerson - guy friend Seth Places and rooms in the story. School/Castle Rooms Girls Dorm Cafeteria Chapel Headmistress Office Bathrooms Hidden Room (Hang out) Hidden Hallways Art Room History Room Hallway Hospital Grounds Lake Forest Forest clearing Shack in woods Other Places Alice's Home Ancient Burial Ground Different Castle hidden in woods Ok I will add or change this later on.
It was the last but hottest day of the summer as Alice Parker, a young woman stood in her room wiping the sweat off of her face. She was a beautiful woman with long blond hair, green eyes, and the perfect body to match. Alice got up, walked over to her dresser and grabbed a picture. The picture was of a man with black hair, brown eyes, and a giant smile spread across his face. He was her father and the picture was the last thing she had ever gotten from him. It had only been a year since her fathers death but she still felt like a huge piece of her was missing. Alice turned around and placed the photo carefully in her suitcase then looked around. The only thing left to pack was a giant pile of clothes that was sitting in the middle of the hard wood floor. She sat down and stared at the pile of clothes and wished, F@#$ just pack yourselves! The clothes all of a sudden started moving Alice jumped up and screamed. "What is going on up there?" Yelled a woman's voice from the bottom of the stairs? "Nothing!" replied Alice, "I just saw a spider." "Well keep it down Seth is sleeping." Alice made a rude face when her mother mentioned Seth. Seth was her mother's new husband. Alice was not to fond of him. He is rude, and smells of alcohol and cigars.
Be careful when using descriptive terms like "the perfect body", it's very open. I suspect you meant lithe and toned... But, I mean for me, the perfect body is almost entirely cybernetic with chrome-plating and super-enhanced strength and organs. So someone says "she had the perfect body" and instantly I think "So they're a cyborg". Or basically, don't just say something is good, say why it's good. Keep up the work, writing is fun
So, do you have a story line in mind, or are you just winging it as you write? I have a friend who is probably not a witch, but she spends most of her waking hours looking after snakes, frogs, rats and mice (snake food) and fish (cichlids). If she casts a spell and it starts raining snakes and toads, I'll know what she really is for sure.
Thanks Sorry it took me so long to reply but I have been very busy. I will try to be on more often and please keep giving me hints. I personally think that I suck at writing and I really want to write some good books. The ones I want to read are not out there so I am going to try to write them.
It was the last but hottest day of the summer as Alice Parker, a young woman stood in her room wiping the sweat off of her face. She was a beautiful woman with long blond hair, green eyes, pale skin, and the body that every woman wants. He only flaw was of a dark mark that was shaped almost like a skull. Alice got up, walked over to her dresser and grabbed a picture. The picture was of a man with black hair, brown eyes, and a giant smile spread across his face. He was her father and the picture was the last thing she had ever gotten from him. It had only been 6 months since her fathers death but she still felt like a huge piece of her was missing. Alice turned around and placed the photo carefully in her suitcase then looked around. The only thing left to pack was a giant pile of clothes that was sitting in the middle of the hard wood floor. She sat down and stared at the pile of clothes and wished, F@#$ just pack yourselves! The clothes all of a sudden started moving Alice jumped up and screamed. "What is going on up there?" Yelled a woman's voice from the bottom of the stairs? "Nothing!" replied Alice, "Just saw a spider." "Well keep it down Seth is sleeping." Alice made a rude face when her mother mentioned Seth. Seth was her mother's new husband. Alice was not to fond of him. He yelled at her for no reason, he hits her when her mother is not around, he drinks all day and is pissed if he is woken from is drunk slumber. Patricia, Alice's mother ignores Seth's ignorance, and agrees with anything that he says. In fact just last week an odd woman stopped at the house to invite Alice to an all girls school. At first Patricia said no but Seth changed her mind so now Alice is going to an all girls school.
It was the last but hottest day of the summer as Alice Parker, a young woman stood in her room wiping the sweat off of her face. She was a beautiful woman with long blond hair, green eyes, pale skin, and the body that every woman wants. He only flaw was of a dark mark that was shaped almost like a skull. Alice got up, walked over to her dresser and grabbed a picture. The picture was of a man with black hair, brown eyes, and a giant smile spread across his face. He was her father and the picture was the last thing she had ever gotten from him. It had only been 6 months since her fathers death but she still felt like a huge piece of her was missing. Alice turned around and placed the photo carefully in her suitcase then looked around. The only thing left to pack was a giant pile of clothes that was sitting in the middle of the hard wood floor. She sat down and stared at the pile of clothes and wished, F@#$ just pack yourselves! The clothes all of a sudden started moving Alice jumped up and screamed. "What is going on up there?" Yelled a woman's voice from the bottom of the stairs? "Nothing!" replied Alice, "Just saw a spider." "Well keep it down Seth is sleeping." Alice made a rude face when her mother mentioned Seth. Seth was her mother's new husband. Alice was not to fond of him. He yelled at her for no reason, he hits her when her mother is not around, he drinks all day and is pissed if he is woken from is drunk slumber. Patricia, Alice's mother ignores Seth's ignorance, and agrees with anything that he says. In fact just last week an odd woman stopped at the house to invite Alice to an all girls school. At first Patricia said no, but after a short and secret conversation that Alice was not included in, she changed her mind. Alice was not happy with her mothers decision. She tried anything and everything to get out of this situation but her mother would not change her mind.
There is an editing feature here. You should choose which story line you want to follow, and then present only that one. Edit whenever you want. At this point you should probably delete entry 7. Since the high priced talent here won't let you do that, just delete all text in entry 7 except a single character such as a period.
It was the last but hottest day of the summer as Alice Parker, a young woman stood in her room wiping the sweat off of her face. She was a beautiful woman with long blond hair, green eyes, pale skin, and the body that every woman wants. Her only flaw was a small dark mark that was similar to a skull. Alice got up, walked over to her dresser and grabbed a picture. The picture was of a man with black hair, brown eyes, and a giant smile spread across his face. He was her father and the picture was the last thing she had ever gotten from him. It had only been 6 months since her fathers death but she still felt like a huge piece of her was missing. Alice turned around and placed the photo carefully in her suitcase then looked around. The only thing left to pack was a giant pile of clothes that was sitting in the middle of the hard wood floor. She sat down and stared at the pile of clothes and wished, F@#$ just pack yourselves! The clothes started moving, Alice jumped, knocked over the lamp, and screamed. "What is going on up there?" Yelled a woman's voice from the bottom of the stairs. "Nothing!" replied Alice, "Just saw a spider." "Well keep it down Seth is sleeping." Alice made a rude face when her mother mentioned Seth. Seth is her mother's new husband. Alice isn't to fond of him. He yells at her for no reason, he hits her when her mother is not around, he drinks all day and is pissed if he is woken from his drunk slumber. Patricia, Alice's mother ignores Seth's ignorance, and agrees with anything that he says. In fact just last week a very odd woman stopped at the house to invite Alice to an all girls school. At first Patricia said no, but after a short and secret conversation which Alice was not included in, she changed her mind. Alice was not happy with her mothers decision. She tried anything and everything to get out of this situation but her mother would not change her mind.
Technically you can post as many copies of the same story as you like. Whether anyone reads it is another question.
I have the same story written a different way, but I do not like it. I am just making the beginning as good as possible. I suck at writing.
