sparks

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by moonlight phoenix, Jan 21, 2006.

  1. moonlight phoenix

    moonlight phoenix Member

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    Spark the ignition,
    Start her up,
    Let her Slide,
    let the feet move along,
    take the pill
    take the time
    can you feel what's inside?
    candy hearts and liquid dreams aren't always what they seem

    could you be the key that fits into the lock?
    could I be the handle you just can't turn?
    Is i t that hard to be free
    Is it true how easily you glide through the evidence of what has once been
    time and time again

    floating in hyperspace
    take your time
    feel your mind
    let me be your guide
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    i like your style, this is vaguelly floaty and...intriguing
     
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