Soul Sista Versus Soul Brotha

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  1. Zion

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    Soul sista/ ~ELODY

    unlike you, you who would write
    "baby"
    you say just baby in the subject;
    and i hear your voice
    hear you call me baby.
    baby (baby said slow, said drawn out with kwadjo flow mojo go say baby)
    one word: baby
    one world in "baby"
    a complete coprhensive conversation in one word...
    in one word a universe. one word enough, in one word everything.
    there would be no more.
    there would be no more.
    nothing extra-dont
    bring text- ra-dio or media- dont
    bring journalism, cost effective, expedience- dont
    bring globilazation or convenience- dont
    make it more than what it is.
    don't add irrelevence:
    no flourishes in communication
    no embellishment of apreciation
    only benevolence:
    no introduction body conclusion
    no stucture conforminty or confusion
    one word: baby
    one world in "baby"
    simple, cuddle into your dimple, comfort word
    hindu, release the mind into, retort the absurd
    one word: baby-
    one world in "baby"
    baby like infant like lover like life
    baby like innocence like ignorance of strife
    in just one word.
    baaaaaaby: baby said slow, said drawn out slow with flow like kwadjo know how
    one word: baby
    one world in "baby"
    unlike you, baaaaaby
    unlike you i will write more
    unlike you, i will write more than "baby"
    i will not hold a universe in a single word.
    a world in a word.
    instead i will write more
    instead, i will begin to explore
    more, more words to convey the meaning we already know
    exists - meaning that exists without this frivilous show
    show of words
    show of word flow rythm sunglow baby dont go - yet
    because i am not done yet
    i have a point to make, let
    the excess go
    and lay low.
    listen...

    "baby" our baby this word baby
    maybe
    maybe baby will be
    more
    baby will be a starting point
    to grow a life from
    our word baby is life, baby
    our world baby is a life, baby
    and this life will become
    more
    this baby will become
    more

    this baby has become...

    a poem.


    [word]


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    Soul Brotha/~KWADJO

    Ha ha ha
    Baby maybe shady
    to a femininsm lady
    Maybe even say free
    of a research cut and pasty
    But while you go to your grave
    a slave to capturing the universe in more words than one
    Id be taking it all in
    with an inevitible grin
    SSHHHhhhh Listen...(silence)...MMMmm Bbbaabbyyyyyyyy
     
  2. Zion

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    maybe baby,
    you know i know your way is right
    you know we know this is no fight:
    we agree.
    we present the opposite ends of the universe
    but we agree.
    combined opposite ends make neutral verse, see
    we agree.

    you know i am no slave
    i will take no bitterness to my grave
    because of my intent.
    i comprehend joy, i intend joy. but i do not contend joy.
    because i am content.
    others try to capture the universe in verse
    because they need to explain it.. and they try to contain it.. they end up
    stain'in its bliss
    but i capture it because i love to retain it, soak up the rain its, and i get to
    remain in its kiss.

    my poem is for apreciation
    my verse is sweet interpretation
    words not attempting explanation
    words soley for celebration
    of this creation
    that we call universe.

    i employ the verse because i love it
    not because i need to but because i want to
    i dont need the words, the verse
    i just like them
    language isnt tedium
    language is just one medium
    that i use.
    my apreciation trancends words, verse, language,
    trancends gender race size age
    poetry is just one medium
    that i use.
    sentiments, i paint play and dance them
    these arts that i use.
    because i apreciate the universe with so much more than verse..
    i apreciate with that same inevitable grin
    words are just a part, they dont even begin
    to show all of my apreciation.
    words are just my linguistic smile, paint my visual smile
    dancing is the smile of my body to a beat
    music is soundwaves smiling in my eardrums
    the whole sun smiles light smiles love smiles heat
    we have to apreciate where the love is coming from
    smiles feels soft sounds lush taste so sweet
    love nourishes like trees like water dried plums

    so live it.

    i am just living while
    i apreciate.
    and if i happen to be living in poem today...
    then baby,
    i say dig.









    ~ELODY
     
  3. Zion

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    Saw the clouds drifting through the light blue sky
    Sight so uplifting I couldn't care if I died

    So I said
    Coolly That see...
    and
    Too Much apprecitation at that see...

    see Catch phrases been sendin prasises
    since "I have a dream" conquered racists
    "We Paint Our Own Faces"
    five words replaces
    whole philisophical
    book cases
    But your right despite
    No matter how good it looks
    The fleeting groove of constant interaction
    cools with majestic hooks
    Such is dance
    a solid trance
    As we celebrate our one chance.
    So dance... Flower...
    Dance...


    ~KWADJO
     
  4. Zion

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    click "reply"
    smile sly
    another poem
    droppin down from the sky
    and i am high
    on words

    high on words despite
    enlightened on words
    despite college town suburbs

    where they arrange me into chronological
    immerse my life in technological
    investing everything in the logical
    in the organization of university
    where race is considered proof of diversity
    without mountain streams or innercity

    in these narrow college town suburbs

    here higher education somtimes forgets individual
    day by day a the same schedualed ritual
    creating homoginzed society and im just risidual
    but if you remeber to question the preaching
    sort out confomity find the real teaching
    absorption of knowlege by perpetually reaching

    there is a window in these colelge town suburbs

    high on words despite
    despite college town suburbs
    because really, all i gotta do is look around
    at the sky watch the swallows fly
    barefoot birth dig my toes into the earth
    looking in from the outside i've found
    that, the key to knowlege is love
    intellectualism is a tool
    to conquor all that is not love
    knowlege is not a weapon fool

    this revolution we speak of
    needs love and wisdome to rule

    the world is mearly in distraction
    mistaking rat racing for action
    only exposed to a tiny fraction
    of the earth's potential interaction

    intellectualism is our new untencil
    abandoned the spoon thats been feeding you lies
    dont be another gretal and hansel
    not seeing the witch behind the disguise
    all learn truth, then ill put down down my pencil

    only then i'll abandon the intellecutal
    after ever single fool
    has been given the gracious tool
    of enlightened mutual rule
    enjoying our common cool

    then knowlege will will be heavan
    AND ignorance will be bliss
    happiness is all that leavans
    the bread of life's sweet kiss

    won't matter if i handwrite or computer type
    because there will be no competition hype
    because nothing is inherintly evil
    even technology isnt the devil
    its just another tool for poem

    just another way to capture
    the poems fallin from the sky
    another day in rapture
    while i wait for your reply


    ~ELODY
     
  5. Zion

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    Theres a fine line of love I shall never cross
    For this very same line hung JESUS on the cross

    Were gonna be here for a while so you might as well smile
    Dont live in deniel we were made to smile

    Stand so high that were never gonna die
    If someone pressures you just kiss them in the I

    Offer peace and love and the heavens above
    In a this of ways I no never get a the shove

    ~KWADJO
     
  6. Zion

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    simplify
    allow me to argue the other side
    i'm just asking myself; why we do we need to classify
    im just hypocrit using words while begging language to die

    see even my name is a classification
    its the nature of the game of articulation
    its not that we need so much elaboration
    im addicted to words

    we have to come to this fallacy, this realization
    that there is no such thing as an education
    without an ivy league matriculation
    that is just words

    noble intent reduced to "intellectual" evaluation
    of the presence or lack of "sophistication"
    yet our scale is based on the quantified acumulation
    of vocabulary words

    our thoughts are now in predetermined rations
    until we no longer belive in a simple conversation
    that does not rely on the fabrication
    of imaginary words

    the whole world suffers while we think of our nation
    our language promotes the oraganization
    of concepts in terms of the sole utilization
    of pronoun words

    its only us and we verses he and she at this station
    we are independent and proud of our derailed creation
    we cant seem to find an unselfish elation
    with possesion words

    just as excessive thought is the root of derision
    these languages have brought us mutual division
    when humanitity forgot the the universal vision
    of love words

    ~ELODY
     
  7. Zion

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    NO doubt
    I shout
    With worries without
    Come about
    The grounds
    where sounds
    rikashe round
    the towns
    maken you me
    and the sea
    all three get down
    Quite like James Brown
    Because we feel good
    Umm...
    So I went across the seas
    and was pleased to appease
    all families by the unity we see
    By sharing a cup of tea
    see
    We couldn't share the same liberties
    Of Speech in portugese
    But our abilities to maintain company
    kept us real as the human comunity
    Umm..
    My english Vocabulary
    Could vary so vastly its scary
    all that an African toung couldn't share with me
    I dont know whats scarier
    The improper english errier
    Or being caught behind a communication barrier

    ~KWADJO
     
  8. VanAstral

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    good stuff, having fun!
     
  9. fulmah

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    Mmmm, yummy! There's a vibrance to your work that's hard not to get into.... very fun to read and get caught in the flow. I could see many of these levelling crowds at a spoken word meet. Great stuff!
     
  10. Zion

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    THere is not enoguh gratitude on this planet to express my aprreciation for allowing me to share with you.
     
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    breakin the barriers of english errors
    means breaking mental walls of heirarchical terrors
    drop one y'all and you loose your signal
    to the hauty prestigious intellectual
    historically elite word devolved to incorrect
    we classify dialects into those we respect
    even our own rules loose thier relevence
    when associated connotation loosed its elegence
    even a literal conjuction for a plural "you"
    is associated with uneducated southern beef stew
    and if used to express a lovely innovation
    will be rejected because of the lackeye connotation
    superficial judgements are claiming racial inferiority
    the audio equivalent is claiming dialectic superiority
    so please, listen to the message within-
    an accent is just the color of the message's skin.

    ~ELODY
     
  12. Zion

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    Ha ha ha
    Ight checkit
    Im bouta burn
    a word
    so absurd
    even a nerd
    could respect it
    Boom JAH ties
    Kickin wise dumb
    wisdom is the Dome
    were in em'
    When pushin the pull
    like surfin on a bull
    so cool
    no not a fool
    and never ever full of bull shit
    We rule when up and rockin
    the cools
    celebraten what JAH gave to you
    a holy tool which school
    may not provide you in the full
    But thats bullshit,
    Life aint no bowl hit
    its an infinite soul fit
    Dont step in and out
    or ya liven in doubt
    not thinkin bout
    the sprout which is given a shout
    Exalt for ya life
    or ya live in a droubt
    Sorry now
    probably wonderen what I talking about
    Its the jive punch glide
    in which harmony resides
    solidified in the bind
    of a world thats unified
    by celebrational preaching
    Not segragational speech
    see
    we reached a point where the
    flow halts steep
    There a keep movin groovin
    for its the constant soul soothing
    not problem robbing
    by snooty snobing
    your self
    with an egotistical wealth
    Health bends towards the good
    and rewards positivities should
    where no wars could
    ever stomp on our foot
    we just put
    ourselfs in a tolerent blood
    open to the world
    and holering from the roof
    top
    stop scamin my message
    with grammatical depth ridge
    For thats not important
    Its all about the smiles Im setten forth-man

    ~KWADJO
     
  13. Zion

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    Ah shit Im an idiot

    Read to quick and called myself a dick

    I now see how unfree I am

    Be it that I snapped when you analyzed my plan

    Fuck. such unluck has got me stuck in a hole with no soul

    Umm, which is to say I took unnessecary offens

    and must now pay the cosiquence

    All you said was that I capture the univeres in one verse

    And of coarse I cast myself a curse and filed for devorce

    Even if you were persecuting me it would only be resoluting me
    or offering a maybe possibility

    Your right this wasn't a fight, and I sat awake for nights
    not really but I sure you can feel me

    I see now the error of my ways, and for showing me this I offer appraisel
    to your sunny sky eyes of light blue and hazel

    Im sorry. Shit Humans can be such idiots.

    Yeah I shoud probably start reading a little more carefully. Nice call chap

    ~KWADJO
     
  14. Zion

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    baby i couldnt agree more
    with the rythme lovin that is flowing
    with the low jiving voice i hear glowin
    when i read yours
    words fit to feed lords
    but whats more
    words fit to feed the poor
    lets read some more
    bask in the glory
    of this wonderful story
    of of two jammin companions, no famine
    that jived well, blue bell, wont sell
    thier arts together forether purple heather cant teather
    now you talkin a little more sense
    and im talking a little more jive
    tearing down our walls our fences
    living every day a little more alive
    not dependent just learing
    satisfaction not yearning
    balanced harmony not burning
    calm ocean not churning
    our pushing and pullin just daily tides
    no way some arogance riskin joy rides
    in front, abide
    behind, dont hide
    honesty reside

    keep smiling sunshine
    with your moon-smile
    spreadin out your soul-fine
    down every road-mile
    no question'in devine
    in laying down love-tile
    then up grows wisdome pine
    now trees are back in-style
    so its up to yours and mine
    to make this trend last awhile.

    bubblin brook streamin up laughing water
    nature-love is reclaimin our earth mother
    song raising up cleaning our sky father
    the beat takin over even those that couldnt bother
    to take part in unity march metal piece peace sauter
    everyone claiming everone as thier soul brother
    the revolution is adopting a cast out daughter
    and she is a unified people no cash can barter
    and she's saying "you give me hope my fire-starter"
    ~ELODY
     
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    ah shit, idiot
    everyone is the hypocrit
    so now i forfeit
    so now no one won

    i think im owing you
    an apology too

    got to thinkin i was a god who
    was always correct,Im fool

    "fuck off" showin id lost my cool
    trying to live by regulation and rule

    forgive me if i snap sometimes
    when releasing the bitter of my unripe lime
    see the citrus oil is seeping into a paper-cut finger
    light stinging irritation was trying to linger
    so that
    i have to relearn that life
    is not a competition
    words sometimes blade knife
    grief from repitition

    let go detatch i need no more
    no word like "best", ill bleed no more
    release me from myself before
    i hurt my world from aft to fore

    please, dont apologise
    for challenging my stubborn guise
    i turn my back but he still tries
    to gently blow away the flies
    of pride that are still my guides

    the inevitable conclusion, finally we reach her
    is that scripture and literature are both valid teachers
    they are our artist writers and wisdom preachers
    i grew up with no religion
    you grew up with a television
    our choices, our past convey
    makes sense, eh?
    maybe we've both been introduced
    to something needed
    makes dents, eh?
    dents in both our stuborn ways
    soemthing to be heeded
    pays rent, eh?
    pays to finish each conversation
    each idea has been seeded
    much love, eh?

    my greatful words please erase the hateful words
    which can fly away with birds
    to find thier own heavan.
    apologies and thank you
    may my sensualtiy never again tank you
    apreciation to your generosity-
    just never again thoughtlessly
    ignore approaching clouds.
    if they are approaching it is the right time
    clouds make wind blowing through warning wind chime
    if you stand and face clouds, you'll enjoy a summer rain
    turn you back will only lead to prolonged pain
    of drought and storm and landscape stain
    instead of soft and gentle rain
    i promise you it will only gain
    us our life path road lane
    to lead in the right diretion
    that does not right now involve erection
    or drug sensuality injection
    only comraderie apreciation
    companionship telepathic communication
    a little gentle romantification
    along with our constant refutation
    debates that help us learn
    cools our burn
    brings us each closer to our median
    our neutral circle in radian
    drawn closer by that gravity
    levitate off one another's energy
    we'll find ours in eccentricity
    find ours in verse enternity
    find ours in just be
    in what is
    and we are
    and i am
    and all can see
    let ourselve be free of inhibition and competition
    i kwadjo osei and you elody gyekis do not exist and yet we are
    these constant beings do not end
    running opposite and parallel,
    i'm always always here for you, my friend.
    ~ELDOY
     
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    yowzahs,
    doing your own thing and doing it well
    dos some honest good stuff, mate!
     
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    ah, aren’t you precious,
    swooping in from nowhere
    and shitting.

    hip cyber heads
    will remember you
    as a producer of shit

    don’t get me wrong,
    shittin’s nifty, fertilizer’s inspirational,
    your product is useless

    you're an adult
    I assume
    you can find a toilet
     
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    obvious you are a noob..i've been around this place for 5 years..so umm...you go flush yourself now..byebye. and your so called poem below sucks.
     
  20. Zion

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    Too true,
    How many
    must go to their grave
    a slave to misbehavior
    never knowing that appreciation
    is their savior
    They paint thier own faces
    as hate stains their disgraces
    One must eat shit
    Before they can speak it
    Must have a bad taste in his mouth
    Lets hope they are not all the same in the "South"
     
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