Something I wrote last night.

Discussion in 'U.K.' started by Koolaid, May 12, 2005.

  1. Koolaid

    Koolaid Member

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    Two things I wrote last night..I kinda liked them so thought I would post it..:)

    Later

    Something touched me, Something wonderful....
    I think it was rain, or maybe it was just tears...
    Don't go, its all perfectly ok...Honestly!
    We know what we are doing..
    You don't really believe you are on your own do you?

    ................................................................................

    Ken Kesey was here

    Further was the name of the bus
    but just how far did they go
    was it really an acid test
    or just one hell of a party

    DOES IT MATTER?

    The koolaid was good and the people laughed
    as......they....cried....
    The dream hit an abrupt halt
    Maybe it was time for them to go further
    without the juice...
    The aid ruined the cuckoo
    but it made the man
     
  2. Claire

    Claire Senior Member

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    yeh "it's" a shortcut... is fun though ;) :)

    Love the prose.. loose, honest :)
     
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