Smoke

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 2extreme, Aug 3, 2007.

  1. 2extreme

    2extreme Member

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    Here we are,
    suicide brothers through time;
    we watch our souls turn to smoke
    and float away without us,
    leaving us and fading up into the dim blue sky,
    until complete nirvana is found.
    Soon we rest peacefully
    and our lives are as perfect as the harmony
    of a symphony orchestra to our ears.

    Tomorrow comes and we wake in sobriety,
    even though it feels like tribulation,
    until finally we meet again
    and our lives are shaped to our creation,
    at least for an hour in limitless time.

    We sit and laugh like the good times we have together
    cost money, only to eventually end up poor, and
    when we're out on the streets
    we'll both be craving more.

    We search for lost bliss, but we'll never find it --
    It turned into smoke
    and floated away without us, leaving us in silence
    and fading
    into the dim blue sky.
     
  2. Naoki_ninja

    Naoki_ninja Bruce Lee's hero

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    wow,...that's all i can say really; wow!~Danni
     
  3. pocketmouse014

    pocketmouse014 Member

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    very nice
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    I like it!
     
  5. 2extreme

    2extreme Member

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    thanks everyone
     
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