good job... well written. i have to say that your anger and views on life remind me of my own when i was your age... so full of angst. just remember that as you become an adult you will have the chance to make your own life. try to stay positive and keep writing... a lot of people make tons of money off songs that lyrics aren't as good as yours. peace, doug
Ehhh...it's okay. This line "While I'm just another rat getting lost in lifes maze." made me think of the Smashing Pumkins lyrics.
