Reversing the norm subconciously

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marquis_de_odde, Jul 17, 2005.

  1. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    Last night as I lay in my single bed
    I dreamt of babies who could talk
    I had to carry them on my shoulders
    But they were really there to move me
     
  2. OneUndone

    OneUndone Member

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    A very curious poem. It kind of works on you, like some dreams do. If babies could talk, I wonder what they'd say?
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    sounds like more could, or should, follow, but even as it is, it's interesting. Like OneUndone said, one wonders what the babies would say, how they would move you, and where you are to go.
     
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