RainStorm

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SillyGreenMeep, Apr 6, 2006.

  1. SillyGreenMeep

    SillyGreenMeep Member

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    lights off
    closed in my room
    on a thursday night
    taking comfort in the darkness
    like a blanket
    like security after a very trying day.
    noone on this floor
    knows how to shut a door
    and I can hear their voices
    travel down the hall.

    "insurance sales man..."
    bits and pieces
    of conversation spoken
    freely, and openly
    the word beer i can hear-
    here and there
    like an echo of a thought
    bouncing back and forth
    off of the closest being
    getting further away
    until its only a memory-
    on repeat
    like one of those corny
    television shows
    a marathon of
    the same thought
    played over and over...

    I think I'm over it.

    next comes a pounding
    on my door
    I step out for a moment
    Only to appease those
    that always try
    to lure me out
    But tonight I feel
    damp. I feel damp and heavy
    like i'm a cloud good and ready for a
    rain storm.
    and tonight its going to rain
    in Portland.
    So I think I'll stay in
    and just listen
    taking comfort that I
    am safe in my shelter
    and I will feel tomorrows warm breeze
    after I ease out of a long
    peaceful dream.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I don't know what it is about this poem, but something in it resonates with me. Also, I liked the phrase "word beer." :D
     
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