Eroded Hieroglyphics It is so mysterious, dark and tranquil.... Too many great lines there for me to quote, for I appreciated the whole piece as it was.
What a great opening... your poetry is beautiful, makes me feel at peace. My eyes follow the lines feeling like they follow a gentle breeze. There's no wasted words anywhere, and this whole piece seems to be harmonic, everything clicking just right. outstanding stuff, looking forward to more from you.