Poems?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Sorrow_Fallen, Mar 22, 2005.

  1. Sorrow_Fallen

    Sorrow_Fallen Member

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    I don't know if anyone here really wants to read my poems... but if so, just post here and I'll start sharing.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Of course, that's the point of this forum! :)


    Post away!
     
  3. Sorrow_Fallen

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    just gonna go in order of how they are on my comp...

    Conformity and the Robotic People
    Amanda Lentini

    Dark and damp is the tunnel life rides
    Death eats at the joy of humans
    Eyes of fear reflect each other
    Tears held back behind closed eyes.
    Sorrow filled robots walk the streets
    A chill covers the ground.
    Death and Hate; Pain and Destruction
    Soulless people taint the world.
    Where hope once rested now walks pain
    Chaos is the only order
    Nothing matters to the masses
    All we want is escape.
    Losing love, we’re lost in sex
    Losing joy, we drug up.
    All I want is life to win.
    If love prevails will darkness lift?
    The dark of death, of hate, of pain
    The shouts of the dead lost souls
    All that falls from people now
    Are the tears they never show.
    People have lost feeling now.
    I hear the shouts rise.
    My heart and spirit break
    Elders say that love will save,
    But if never given it can never thrive.
    Survival in this day’s masses?
    Anarchy might save them all.
    I will libel in my life.
    For without love, it’s all I have.
     
  4. Sorrow_Fallen

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    Blood and Tears
    Amanda Lentini

    The world is here and I’m a curse
    Flash of red and the ground is stained
    From my face stream tears of life.
    There’s nothing here and never was
    So now it’s time to stain the ground
    The blood of passion, of hopes and dreams
    Exits the body in a dark red stain
    Water running down my face.
    Take me, lead me from this place.
    I’ll stand here in your eyes
    Make you think that I belong
    To the outside I look whole
    But inside I’m dying slowly.
    I stain the world- stain it with my blood and tears
    Call to me and bring me back
    Save me from the failure that is fact
    See the pain and hear my cry
    There’s no salvation with no acknowledgement
    Feel yourself stain the ground
    Lose your blood and tears to stimulate the earth.
    I have no being staying here
    Take me to my rest.
    I’ll stand here in your eyes
    Make you think that I belong
    To the outside I look whole
    But inside I’m dying slowly.
    I stain the world- stain it with my blood and tears
    My blood and tears I’ll stain
    The ground, the world is stained
    I am the cause of all these stains
    I stain the world with blood and tears.

    A tad darker... but I like it. Need to still put music to it cause I always intended it to be lyrics.
     
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