poem....maybe...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Feb 6, 2005.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    to all
    and more....


    incarcerate, to dictate whose body
    would you choose.
    not gravel from ground,under skin
    from tears.
    yet a balance to reveal.
    only lavish eyes,tongues so wide.
    To lick the inner peace...

    what willing roots do we unearth.
    not to mention, friuts that fall...
    but soul inhailed,to spike a heart,
    for you..me..who?
    so believe ,or not. inner views
    can twist you.
    In two, mind blown outbursts,
    soul unnerved for who...

    A heart, that life of lies. drink
    now and deep ,you,
    have a path,within the tranquil
    waves,a danger in you.
    transparent quilt,the worlds afire..
    only for you..
    take hold the vessel,climb high the
    hill,past me ,past you..
    the whole life,each drop of air...
    to taste for us each day...

    to you i say,be whole,be free
    to be you to be me....
    but watch ,see the cost,it ends
    our world in greed.....
    so body longs groans for peace.
    what power shall they send....
    to free the human,soul caught
    high...
    mind blown gone....heart left aside.
    yet togetherness is in the words..
    we,you me....


    thank you
    love n peace from saff
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi there
    sorry seems to have posted this twice

    loven peace from saff

    great welcome to words added to this
    thank you....
     
  3. OneUndone

    OneUndone Member

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    Very nice, Saff. Digs down into the soul of transformation and tries to make peace with the light at the center. Always enjoy reading your work!
     
  4. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    what willing roots do we unearth.
    not to mention, friuts that fall...
    but soul inhailed,to spike a heart,
    for you..me..who?
    so believe ,or not. inner views
    can twist you.
    In two, mind blown outbursts,
    soul unnerved for who...

    A heart, that life of lies. drink
    now and deep ,you,
    have a path,within the tranquil
    waves,a danger in you.
    transparent quilt,the worlds afire..
    only for you..
    take hold the vessel,climb high the
    hill,past me ,past you..
    the whole life,each drop of air...
    to taste for us each day...

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    Nice lines in there Saff. Got a boat load a catch up to do in here,lol, what...did everyone and their second cousin post in here the last 12 days my puter crashed?
     
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