Personal statement (critique appriciated)

I decided to make a list of my values, or a personal statement. Here's a rough draft. Critique and advice much appriciated. Also, where would this be more appropriate besides Random Thoughts?

Personal Statement

1. Art is life, Life is art
2. Question everything
3. No censorship
4. Everyone deserves love, peace, freedom, and equality
5. Expression is life, life is a stage
6. everyday, decide to have a good day
7. Fuck the police
8. Fuck big corporations
9. Fuck the man
10. Fuck authority
11. Work only as hard as you are paid to
12. Always rebel
13. Never surrender
14. Never obey
15. Never give in
16. Never conform

 

your life is going to be unnecessarily difficult.

you're also going to get an STD.

 

Sounds like typical hippy bullshit that almost everyone gives up at 30.

 

wow...thats ridiculously stupid

more appropriate? i'd say the dreadlock forums

 

With all that fucking in your manifesto don't forget to use a condom.

 

thats a baddaseed credo--fuck the donkey and other haters

 

that's a typo right? more like 20.

 

i coulda sworn it had dropped to like 16-17 by time they got out of that stage...soooo wrong...wtf was i thinking?

 

hmm, that's funny. Hasn't been so far. I've lived this way all my life, and only recently attempted to put it into words. open your mind maybe?

 

17. never lay ALL your cards on the table

 

To 'partly' answer or critique what you wrote.----I do agree with number 8 thats for sure,"fuck big corporations".--I also agree with number 6 .----I think in some other things one just has to take a relaxed "common sense" more open minded view and approach.And sometimes the right thing is not black or white but somewhere in the middle.--

 

thanks! good to see a fellow SoCal native.

 

I'd normally agree, but the OP says he's 21, so maybe he'll give it up by 22....

 

I'm sorry, I didn't think free thinking was something you grew out of shortly before you buy a suit and tie and become a sheep.

 

grow up maybe?

congrats on living like a child throughout your youth. it can't last forever though.

 

Oh wow, look guys we have a orginal thinker here! I swear we've never heard anything like this before!


Noob.

 

if you think that is free thinking, then you should have your head shoved farther up your ass

 

reciting the hippie handbook is the opposite of free thinking.

and the term is sheeple.

 

I need some new bumper stickers

 

The 'angry rebel' approach is cuteish when you are 12, but a more relaxed and openminded view gives you a more satisfying life.