pain

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by guinea, Feb 26, 2007.

  1. guinea

    guinea Member

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    pain is what i know today
    all that's good has gone away

    how this time did i get to be
    so depressed inside of me

    before the weekend i was high on life
    and today i feel the joy has died

    i don't know what to do
    my auora has gone from bright to doom

    depression grips around my throat
    it laughs outloud as it gloats

    it once agains has its hold
    and promises to not let go

    it grips me tight i can not breathe
    it distorts everything i see

    it scares the hell out of me
    must find a way to be free
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Its just a bad case on Monday-itus.

    Seriously, good poem.
    Keep them coming.
     
  3. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    that was really good. just keep your spirits high
     
  4. Justagrrl420

    Justagrrl420 Member

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    sounds so so familiar..i know how that feels..not fun. hope u feel better soon..
     
  5. guinea

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    thank you for the kind words everyone, they are well appreciated
     
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