uncovering. water, the heart eyes fingers making gestures unread confused tension orange blue i cannot relate what i imagine to be true come from love come from love. come from love.... i falter. i fall in to the sadness. somewhere the moon is quiet above us. the sun is hidden behind clouds the ground. she moves me she knows me. i try desperately to keep you close to feel you breathing heart beating this full ness takes so much this sinking feeling thank you for all youve given me. even this, which is overwhelming.
Ohh I liked that. When I was reading it, it made me go "aaaww" Good poem I liked it! Thanks for sharing it.
I liked how you reffered to your feelings to orange and blue. To me it gave almost an ora presence. I liked how you gave love a description. "even this, which is overwhelming." Great poem <3
Orange and Blue indeed. Quite a Proper time to be espousing such a creed. I burnt the Sun and the perfumes thereof, and there was Love. I am gladdened in my Heart by your awe. A whisper; a tremor. There is no difference. eMBeMLaHV!
hi there what long days we view ,from sunrise to sunset. the colours within all. overwhelming life can be,with all its beauty beauty that shines from us all. thank you for this enlightening piece i love the change from head to heart your words of chosen verse. gestures unread confused. you know this journey already.......... thankyou love npeace from saff
thanks so much for the comments, especially saff, you always help me to understand what ive put acrossed, and understand my own words better, love and light
I got this drowning feeling when I read the first stanza, which was your intention, from the title of the poem. Very powerful.
