No Name #2

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SomeSouthernTown, Sep 18, 2006.

  1. SomeSouthernTown

    SomeSouthernTown Member

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    Your Eyes tell the Sadness like I've never known before
    I can tell it when you smile
    Your touch used to be So tender and kind but
    now All we do is shake hands
    But wouldn't it be half-hearted
    If now for the first time we kissed?
    And wouldn't it be Foolish of me
    To ruin something like this
    The forecast sent out a warning that a hard rains A-gonna Fall
    and it did and now I'm Stuck indoors
    And all of these Hard feeling I haven't felt in a while
    their Pouring down Just like that rain
    I don't want to be Cruel or Unkind
    but you stuck a knife in My Heart
    I know I usually don't Act this way
    but this time I think I'm Fine
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Good poem. I like the emotion portrayed by it. I can relate to those feelings.

    Peace and love
     
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