No fury like a mans

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Feb 26, 2007.

  1. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Black, menacing clouds build on the horizen.
    A mighty thunderstorm is approaching fast.
    I am not ready for the fierceness of the blows,
    Nor the fury of his vengeful anger.

    One strike to the left, another to the right!
    Thunder rattles the china hanging on the wall.
    BOOM! A plate shattered after it fell from its place.
    What shall survive this massive, killer storm?

    It appears pain is the only thing left as the dust settles.
    Just broken hearts and tattered hopes lying askew.
    Splintered dreams are all that remain of me.
    Lonely peices of my soul, shredded from within.

    I saw the signs of trouble ahead and ignored them.
    I turned a blind eye to all those who warned me of what was to come.
    It's my fault that I didn't see this monsoon coming.
    What shall we call this monstrousity which left you battered and broken, mind body and soul?

    I pull myself into a fetal position and utter "ADAM"
     
  2. hippy i am

    hippy i am poppy seed bagels

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    haha, every woman can relate.
    kudos to you for incorporating adam & eve into this.
    seeing as how they are the first, simplest couple ever.
     
  3. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    That Was Excellent, Keep Up The Good Work
     
  4. deram_scholzara

    deram_scholzara Member

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    actually sounds more like some moments with my ex-girlfriend to a certain extent... she was vicious at times
     
  5. OleFlowerMan

    OleFlowerMan Member

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    Oooooooooooooooooooch Ouw :(
     
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