"Nine to Five to Nine"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fylthevoyd, Feb 21, 2006.

  1. fylthevoyd

    fylthevoyd Super Moderator Lifetime Supporter

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    "Nine to five to Nine"

    As the sun crosses the horizon,
    minds caught in the twilight dimension.
    Vitalize,to apply the 'guise,
    to face the tribes,and addle the wise.

    Concrete arteries are astir,
    manufacturing infinite departure.
    Reality is thrown asunder,
    disturbed by the electronic thunder.

    Organized policies ever so abstruse,
    programmed for a mental recluse.
    The shallowness of the doctrinaires,
    for success is determined by questionaires.

    Concrete arteries are astir,
    manufacturing infinite departure.
    Reality is thrown asunder,
    disturbed by the electronic thunder.

    Peel the plastic face of deciet,
    for the day of perjury is complete.
    Into the twilight dimension once more,
    preserved to perform as the perpetual actor.

    Fylthevoyd
    (Greg)2005
     
  2. fylthevoyd

    fylthevoyd Super Moderator Lifetime Supporter

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    Here's another short one of mine,any feedback is welcomed.Thanks.

    "Lunar Delight"

    As the moon crests the sky,
    nature is singing its' lullaby.
    T'is a serene star-filled night,
    bestowing mental delight.

    Entranced by the twilight rainbow,
    delivered through the lunar glow.
    Taste the enchantment of freshness,
    while savouring the stillness.

    Time to relax,thus unwind,
    dispose of the worries,clear the mind.
    The day is done,finally at rest,
    surrounded by serenity,at its' best.

    As the moon crests the sky,
    nature is singing its' lullaby.
    T'is a serene star-filled night,
    bestowing mental delight,by lunar light.

    Fylthevoyd
    (Greg) 1983
     
  3. Hippygurl2005

    Hippygurl2005 Member

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    Greg man this is very awesome :) i love it
     
  4. fabioula

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    awesome
     
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