My thoughts and feelings

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Down_In_It, Sep 24, 2004.

  1. Down_In_It

    Down_In_It Member

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    Just thought I'd write how I felt last night. How's my writing?


    I looked into the mirror to see a boy staring back at me, with eye's like deep blue marbles with huge round pupils
    that you could get lost in. I nearly did for a second! I steard into the boys face, how pale, how... fragile! I wondered
    what the effects would be if I smashed his face into the mirror. My forehead would crack and my light brown curly long starnds
    of hair would be mixed with a bloody red mixture of torn pale white flesh and splinters of shatterd silver mirror. I could
    almost feel the tepid red fluid runing down my face in thick rose red streams.
     
  2. SelfControl

    SelfControl Boned.

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    We've all been here. Just remember that, no matter how much you may feel like a prisoner in your own body, it is pretty much the only thing that keeps yr brain off the floor.
     
  3. sentient

    sentient Senior Member

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    thats brilliant I havent stopped laughing since I read this.
    You should have carried it on and got to a bit where instead you decided to super-glue your younger brother to a camel called "George" and then set fire to the camels tail so it would run away and you'd never see your brother again because you hate him
    There could also be an aardvark called Brian that plays the banjo in the story and he introduces you to an elk called dave who is an alcoholic
     
  4. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

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    That would look excellent on a Christmas card.
     
  5. sentient

    sentient Senior Member

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    or any gift wrapping paper
     
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