My Poems&Thoughts

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PatchWorkKid, Jan 6, 2006.

  1. PatchWorkKid

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    Blue Wolf
    by Patches
    Follow the the Blue Wolf, and you'll find the path to a greater Future. Allow this great Blue Wolf teach you what it is like to be a true "Hunter". She will become your inner soul. She is young, but old. She is the Wind of your song, the Earth of you skin, the Spirit of your tears, and the Fire of your heart. She is the teacher of the old, and wise. Listen to her tales of the great creaters, The Lady, and The Lord, and you will find truth behind each tale. You must listen carefully, because her voice is, but a whisper in this loud world of human chaos, destruction, greed, and power. She will live in you as long as you listen with your whole heart, and being. Respect her, and she'll help you through your toughest trials. Remember her, when you feel you are lost, and strayed from your path. I prom she'll be there.
     
  2. Keanua Otter

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    when i read this my eyes get teary and i feel a lump in my throat chakra. thanks PatchWorkKid!
     
  3. PatchWorkKid

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    Actually thats just a rough draft...uhm...Thanks.;)
     
  4. PatchWorkKid

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    Now it is finished! Enjoy!
     
  5. PatchWorkKid

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    You must not force your talent. It must come on it's own accord. Respect it, and it will bring you ancient treasures of beautiful creative power.
    by Patches
     
  6. PatchWorkKid

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    Challenges are part of your destiny
     
  7. PatchWorkKid

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    I am so lost.
    I feel nothing
    I am confused
    My body, and inner being feel like someone stabbed me
    I am nothing
    Noone hears me cry
    I no longer see truth of who I am
    Where has my energy gone
    I am fading away
     
  8. jerzyphresh

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    that is awesome, i love it great talent
     
  9. PatchWorkKid

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    THE WOMAN WHO SOUGHT FREEDOM, AND A PEACEFUL SLEEP OF ETERNAL REST.
    BY PATCHES
    She exited the never ending tunnel of darkness, pain, and sorrow.
    She flew away to a better day.
    She truimphed in catching the stars.
    She danced on the moon.
    She swung from tree to tree.
    She studied the birds and the bees.
    She became the Queen of the wolves.
    She experienced freedom to connect, and explore Mother Earth, and her bountiful gifts of life; which she birthed.
    She became the crone of wisdom and age.
    She became the maiden of life and death.
    She landed in a meadow, smoked a pipe, and danced with the fairies.
    She feasted on delicous, and delicate mushrooms.
    She entered the realms of magical dreams.
    She drank from a sweet tasting river of happiness.
    She laughed and played with the children of the rainbow.
    She played the flute, and learned to play the violin of happiness.
    She climbed a moutain, and laid down to rest for eternity.
    May the Goddess and the god bless her, so she may survive as a harmonias energy in the mountain, woodland, meadow, river, and clouds.
     
  11. soaringeagle

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    patches..i'm blown away\
    that last 1 is amazing
    your soul is definatly way older then your eyears
    keep up the awesome work
     
  12. Sir Stephan

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    Nice.
     
  13. PatchWorkKid

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    Thanks U guys!
     
  14. sylvanlightning

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    Lovely strength, full of magic and hope. :)


    'THE WOMAN WHO SOUGHT FREEDOM, AND A PEACEFUL SLEEP OF ETERNAL REST' is stunning as well. Well done. I like your writing.
     
  15. DoyalConQueso

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    you're like a shaman sculpting the smoke of bonfires into images archetypal and charged with power. Most impressive
     
  16. PatchWorkKid

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    Wow. u guys are so kind.
     
  17. campfire-fly

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    That was beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

    Cheers
     
  18. PatchWorkKid

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    be patient, and maybe i'll beable to think up another one; but might be a while. Who knows?!;)
     
  19. fabioula

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    your one of the greats,if you wrote a book of poetry id buy it.i want to be that women,you tell a beautiful story
     
  20. PatchWorkKid

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    Wouldn'tn that be wonderful! I would luv to be her to.:p
     

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