my first poem here...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by UXnIHAOnUXbmUXn, Nov 12, 2006.

  1. UXnIHAOnUXbmUXn

    UXnIHAOnUXbmUXn Member

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    We're running up some sky tonight
    on a travelling backwards dig
    we think we're lucky astronauts
    but we're only pigs
    I don't know why they're waving
    or appearing on those shows
    It must be someone smiling
    they're smiling because they glow
    My friends are all the others
    the others are my friends
    I hope you're into decent skin
    that's why I cant touch her
    can't touch her she's far too in
    Don't be so quick up with the shutters
    I don't mind the light
    though my room is rather cluttered
    I don't seem bothered much tonight
    See me running in my underwear
    as I determine my own plight
    somethings such the matter
    I'm simply not very right
    Don't blame this on the silverware
    just cause I eat only with my hands
    In the morning I'll be clammoring
    and playing with my band

    I haven't been on hipforums in quite awhile, I just thought this would be a good place to share some poetry. I haven't shared any poetry in a very long time... and i cannot think of a name for this.
     
  2. mrswoo

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    I quite enjoyed this. It reminded me of some stuff that a friend of mine used to write. It was original, almost like a conscious stream of thought, very organized and real.
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    oh my god man



    this is the coolest poem i've read in the longest time
     

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