mist & mirror

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Sep 15, 2005.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    cancel opinion
    mist and mirror alibi's
    cos we go on living
    with or without disguise
    but breaking out
    along a weaver's web
    you get to shedding
    the wounded wedding
    to evolving dread.

    it's illusion.
    it's threaded thin
    but you joined them
    figuring the solution's
    without real evolution

    and your paramour's will pour libation
    in admiration, cemented to wisdom within
    with a cheshire grin when they think
    you're thinking of them.

    and you intend transcendence?
    you crave tidal waves
    and praise dependence to consent
    cos the absence is intense
    when the curtains are closed
    when curled into a corner
    when imperfections war
    futility and misery
    aren't mysteries
    to explore.
     
  2. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    oh wow...that was absolutely captivating...i loved it....
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Holy shit that last part is LOUD and sizzzzzzzzling.
     
  4. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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    Stoke and amplify the slow groaning awakening.


    Thank You.
     
  5. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    Yowzah!!!
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Excellent, love the first and last stazas mucho :)
     
  7. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Yeah, the first and last ones got me too.
     
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    bee Member

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  9. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    thx for the comments, all... glad it was enjoyed and hope the contradictions weren't too unphasing :)
     
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