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Live today, not tomorrow

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by guinea, Feb 21, 2007.

  1. guinea

    guinea Member

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    you don't know anything,
    until you know.
    By then it is
    time to go.
    Don't stay below
    for as the wind blows
    so do the days keep on going.
    Try as hard as you can
    to stay in command,
    but don't be ashamed to take a hand.
    Be quick when you are able a hand to lend.
    Don't be afraid to let love go
    and allow hearts to mend.
    Honor, you always should defend.
    Hold your head up high
    and feel alive,
    feel the jive.
    Don't be afraid child,
    to be alive
     
  2. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    i really enjoyed your poem
     
  3. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Tis wisdom I find lurking in these words of yours,
    Produce more for my tired eys, if you would, so that I might feel younger while reading them.
     
  4. LetLovinTakeHold

    LetLovinTakeHold Cuz it will if you let it

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    I felt those words spoken into the air around me. Very nice piece...
     
  5. guinea

    guinea Member

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    thank you for the encouraging words, they exceed my expectations of approval/ im glad that there of some that care to share in my thoughts
     
  6. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    i liked that. similar in style and purpose to the one of mine you commented on.
     
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