Let's test our love, I said You vowed you'd swim the widest river, There's one just out of town- Hurry and we'll get there! I'll wait on the other side Just where the current's strongest, It's a perfect stretch for us And in its width the longest! I know there's frost tonight It's frigid and it's biting, Snow is but a half hour off And the wind is rising! I'd build a fire for you But the kindling's awful wet, You could take your bearings by the moon But the clouds have covered it! At least, we'll soon both know Our love is deep and true, Tomorrow you can climb a mountain I know where to find one too!
awww... Gosh I love love poems... that made me smile big and laugh a little too, there at the end. verry nice poem my friend!
lovely, you offer all to find the mountain to climb together ,to be... thank you for this very interesting poem. from saff
Kidder, I hate this poem! All this stuff about swimming the widest river and climbing the highest mountain is metaphorical. It's not to be taken seriously. Sheesh! Go home and turn the lights out and crawl back to bed! Love's not to be tested, it just is. Yours, hiphop gyrl
i really felt that poem i wish i could wright things like that i can only express my fellings in my mind oh by the way im new here and im a bit
Weedy love, thanks for dropping in! Osiris, I knew you and hiphop gyrl would hit it off! The nastier she gets, the more I like her!
