Let's not play with gravity

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EternalHunter, Mar 8, 2006.

  1. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    Here are the more important ones,
    tamed by the iron tongue and
    mouths too dry and
    hot for salivation.

    Here are the quiet cheeks,
    scarred by the strokes of teeth
    too numb to feel how
    deep they sink.

    And here is the lost one,
    flying high her
    symmetry becomes my skin
    and I am bled and one again.

    Man,,, how she slid
    off the slick slide of domed dew
    and dripped like spit

    to evaporate
    too hot and dry to
    let her form frame free.
    Taste the danger,,,
    now sheÕs falling
    off the mountain.
     
  2. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    She need only learn to glissade. :)
     
  3. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    True, but spectators can give only advice. You know that. :p
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Absolutely beautiful! I feel in never-never land... :)
     
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