Komplimentary Kisses

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lozi, Mar 28, 2005.

  1. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    You're on a perpetual sea of compliments, now.
    It's like an express train,
    flowing from a neverending source.
    The Rivertrain tries to caress the moon-beaming rocks,
    whilst the air, crisp and subtle,
    whispers dreams of secret fantasies.

    Weave,
    The makebelieve castle.
    With it's turrets of silver, etched like granite.
    Beckoning the river train through it's osophegus.

    It's graceful journey carries on,
    as the compliments keep falling.
    Raindrops flutter.
    you inspired me.
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Tis made me smile, enjoyed the weaving and I love the title, thanks for sharin.
     
  3. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    whoa man, this was beautiful!

    i especially loved

    "The Rivertrain tries to caress the moon-beaming rocks."
     
  4. jesikhaviolet

    jesikhaviolet Member

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    aww wow =) someone's happy! i understood this one =P
     
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