InstruMentals

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Mountain Madness, Sep 24, 2011.

  1. Mountain Madness

    Mountain Madness Guest

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    When I look at the earth, I see a woman
    But not in the dirt, more like in the ocean
    When I look at the earth, I'm happy she gave birth
    To my precious girl and these pretty strange birds
    When I look at the earth, I really want to flirt
    Take off my shirt and show her her own work
    I'm in love with her symmetry and her topography
    And I love to lay under a tree with her on top of me
    With her I never frown cuz I'm a king with a crown
    But when the tears come down she can flood the whole town

    If you want more metaphors to die for
    Let creativity be my chore
    I will pick my brain apart into crumbs
    to properly entertain your ear drums
    Let us begin with snares and drum bass
    That which shakes the spines of vertebrates
    Followed by generous amounts of cymbals
    That which excite the walls of your temples
    Music is great cuz you can make it yourself
    And it gets better as it sits on the shelf
    Beethoven did it, even though he was deaf
    And now his spirit, lives long after his death
    Camouflaged in a beautiful symphony
    Sound comes together as a trojan army
    Invading your brainwaves' frequency
    And this happens quite frequently
    You are influenced to such a degree
    by little vibrations you cant even see
    How frustrating that really must be
    Poor humans, no wonder they're crazy

    Let your imagination run wild with style
    Indulge in the fashion dont be shy hit dial
    call me up now son, ill stir up your passion
    make your brain functions spin like tires with no traction
    You had a choice but it seemed you chose my voice
    Dont get too close though I dont want a divorce
    Now I'm no Pink Floyd when I play with these music toys
    But it brings me joy like a kid with his chips ahoys
    Follow my words to the tee if you wanna see
    Vivid imagery that's beyond your capacity

    Rising sharply above the dry desert bed
    the sleeping Indian, yeah the Indianhead
    Trekking with eyes red I see ghostly arrowheads
    Flying by my head I foresee the bloodshed
    Imagination, brings back the undead
    The mountain lion, leaves them all dead
    These jagged peaks got me interested
    Might spend a few weeks out here instead
    Climb them all with the muscles that you fed
    If you don't fall remember what I said

    Here I sit on this mountain slope
    I'm getting sick but the scene is dope
    Here I learned how to climb on snow
    And here I burn calories so slow
    Or so it seems because when I'm here
    It's like my dreams, I fly everywhere
    But today we explored Tahquitz Ridge
    Found a way to climb up the steep edge
    Then we were greeted by a sea of clouds
    So therapeutic I could sing out loud
    That I love this place cuz it keeps me sane
    and I froze in place the first time I came

    sorry.. ramblings.. peace!
     
  2. WolfLarsen

    WolfLarsen Member

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    Some great wild imagery here!
    If rhyming gets in your way then forget about rhyming. You don't need it. Everybody is probably better off without rhyming. The ryhme in poetry is dying.
    Anyway, there's some really good lines here. You got talent dude.
     

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