I wrote a song for my brothers birthday today. he will probably never hear it.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SillyGreenMeep, Oct 29, 2007.

  1. SillyGreenMeep

    SillyGreenMeep Member

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    You like the sun
    and I like the rain
    But we both are escaping
    Just the same,
    from the snow.

    Although it's been
    3000 miles
    since I've seen your last smile
    We still are the same
    just trying to get through
    another cold yesterday

    Happy Birhtday to you
    I hope you are doing
    just as fine or better
    better than me.

    Because we spent years apart
    but I can still feel your blood
    pumping through my body.
    We have the same heart.

    I hope you enjoy
    the sun if you can
    but no matter the weather
    winters coming
    and it might snow
    it might snow
    in our memories

    So no matter the distance
    of hours between us
    or money for tickets to by
    I'll love you forever
    my brother
    my best friend
    happy birthday to you
     
  2. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    you should buy a bday card and mail this to him...he would appreciate it
     
  3. Chris92

    Chris92 Member

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    I thought it was beautiful
     
  4. Chris92

    Chris92 Member

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    Really just reading it sends chills down my back definitely show this to him
     
  5. marquis_de_odde

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    That was really nice,always let those you love know what you feel while you can.
     

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