I see

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LordInsanity, Feb 3, 2005.

  1. LordInsanity

    LordInsanity Member

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    I say the hopelessness in you're eyes
    i see the hate growing and darkness
    i see war and i see the politicans
    i see the liers and the lies

    BUT

    I see beauty in a child's smile
    i see hope when i should be hopless
    i see joy when others wanna show hate
    I see the good and the bad...that is Life
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    or perhaps, you see the bad and the good rather than the good and then the bad? all in all-nice simple poem. gets to the point. quite uplifting:)
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I may be an asshole, but I gotta do it...
    see, your, politicians, liars, hopeless.

    Besides that, I liked the poem, really gets to the duality of life, and that we have a choice which side we choose to see. Thanks for sharing :)
     
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