Head Twist

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by shaman sun, Oct 22, 2006.

  1. shaman sun

    shaman sun Member

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    Wake up.

    Caught you sleep walking

    In your sun.

    Hit the flame with a

    Cold stutter.

    What a fool you've made,

    Pity on you, so

    Hardly a game.


    Watch you snicker

    Bitter amusement,

    Only half the fun

    When the fool has bickered back

    and run.

    Empty eyes, looking backwards,

    What've you got to say?

    Mumble, stumble

    Off your pedestal,

    Wasn't yours anyway.

     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Another well written piece. I like reading your poems. They're always really interesting and different from stuff that I write.

    Peace and love
     
  3. ethanberry

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    I am beginning to be a fan. Thank you for sharing your poems.
     
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