Good Eye?? help with spiffy...

Discussion in 'Art' started by teepi, Sep 2, 2004.

  1. teepi

    teepi living my dream

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    I of course am here alone and need someone with a good eye to help me see if this is ready for auction,spiff it up, it's 24x30...I saw that I missed the centers of the flowers on the table...and I think the doilie under the vase maybe should be a bit darker.....

    Anyone??......



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  2. hippietoad

    hippietoad Member

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    Yeah, you forgot to put my ugly mug sitting at the table :p
     
  3. loveflower

    loveflower Senior Member

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    lol i like it- it's good for a kitchen or a mudroom..
     
  4. teepi

    teepi living my dream

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    HAHA TOAD....actually I'm still working on your ugly mug hangin out the window of a VW bus.......

    Got the sketch all done....next comes the paint...
     
  5. weep

    weep Senior Member

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    I love the colours!!
     
  6. zorchmedia

    zorchmedia Member

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    First of all..and I say this will all sincerety....This is a fabulous painting!! I took a good long look at it.....the colors are beautifull and the circular flow of everything makes me fall inside it....it has a free and natural feel, yet is mathematically perfect in it's structure...much like the universe we live in. You are definantly connected to its power. ;)
    I wouldn`t change anything on it.....one suggestion though...If you were to add just a hint of light purple shadow under the flower on the left hand side of the vase, it will help define the shape and contrasts of the vase and flower and give a sort of counterpoint to the lightness of the doily. I tested it in photoshop....seemed to make a subtle difference.
    That is the only suggestion I could come up with. I`me blown away by this piece.....You are a truely wonderfull artist!! :)

    Btw...thanx for the advice on e-bay....everything you mentioned was very valuable information...Thanx again for sharing... :):)
     
  7. ArtLoveMusic

    ArtLoveMusic Senior Member

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    heya babe... the top right star could do with the same shadding that the left has... just that little dark blue lowlight :)i love the window in the image... it draws you through the painting and out the other side almost :)
     
  8. girlwoo

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    that's awesome. i love your work. good job. leslie
     

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