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Evening

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by April90, Feb 26, 2011.

  1. April90

    April90 Member

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    I'm breathing the smoke of fruit cigarettes,
    One's already burnt; I am craving for more.
    I'm lighting the last one with no regrets -
    If you were beside me, it well could be four.

    I'm slowly turning the key in my lock;
    It usually takes me two minutes or three,
    But I have been blind to the obstinate clock -
    Alas, there is no one waiting for me.

    My room has no present but treasures the past;
    Its walls will recall every breath that we share...
    I'm feeling so cold. I break down at last:
    My papers will choke on the ink of despair.

    My heart's like a violin's sound, unclear;
    It's out of tune for a permanent matter.
    I'll sign all these verses with only one tear
    And seal with a sigh just to send with a letter.
     
  2. Cleansedreality

    Cleansedreality Member

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    Nice man. Love the imagery.
     
  3. lovelyxmalia

    lovelyxmalia Banana Hammock Lifetime Supporter

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    very beautifully written
     
  4. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    As much as I want you to get hit by a bus, I liked this and felt it was your best drop on these boards.
     
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