Drip-notes

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Flux, Dec 6, 2006.

  1. Flux

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    Skipkickin' down the skidmark
    Billygoat bray
    And vomit splaying out guts
    On to street and sidewalk splatter
    Bugs and vermin worm crawling
    See sawing off amputee rotten
    Flex mind clench crash into the house
    of clutches bust open in flames and clunky bits
    wash into a tide of rooms and shifting stairways and bookways and
    alleys of dimly lit whisper tongues and flesh bighting


    Crawl and vermin leap back creep to the edge of the page
    and flinch at the world spiraling down and cut slice to the pit
    Shimmer luminosity frothing over slosh-slide into tangible things

    Staring longdown halls into nutbolts of a red light switch board
    Blowing into flapping burlap rip open to roller junction cutback and
    Metal door hinge slam back
    Dumpster foamwaves splash
    slide down sloppy alley suds and straight off the edge
    straight down to ogle the gurgle of deep bubble floods
    Hiss into heat steam sexfox bitch arched back and tongue lash



    P.S. The poem has no hidden meaning or symbolism. I think the sounds of the words combined w/ visual descriptions create kind of an experience. Not to toot my own horn, of course......but i like it :)
     
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