DopeSickKid's Poetry

I've read this recent work.

 

i liked them all but the first one maybe you should try to use another word besides fuck but thats just my opinon but other then that there all great!

 

Jesus! If you take this kind of honesty, and keep putting it out there, and hopefully, get past adolecence, you're gonna be a great fucking poet. I mean it. I imagine this is what a thousand kids have been thinking when they've spoken with me, but I've yet to hear it so powerfully.

 

fuck off and die is my favourite one of the lot. powerful shit, dude. keep it up, don't ever stop tapping into that energy.

 

Rock on. Love your poetry and your solid posts.
My regards to you my brother.

~*

 

That is really powerful stuff. Keep writing, you have a lot of talent.

 

Start govin your hair instead,
vuk tryin to verbalize duh enigmah,
what iz realer iz your sanity,
an duh feel uv dreads weighin
back your head level with duh Horizon.

gove up and grow out HAIR

 

dude, are you foreign? you should work on that english and grammar before you try to insult someone....just my opinion.

 

hahaha..... oh man, i agree completely. i'm sure he's a half-witted 10 year old with nothing to do but write nonsense. you should check out some of his other posts to really go bonkers. i can't stand idiocy.

 

what did the world do to you?

 

lots of attitude man...and lots of beautiful poetry...
sometimes feelings like that just make you go insane man
rock on
keep on truckin

 

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Gawd, some of this stuff is awful. You're never going to go anywhere listening to people who know squat about the basic demands of pen and paper. Time for you to stop writing and do some reading. Respect the craft and do your homework.

 

Blackie, a noble defence! Kudos to you. Hey, I've read 'Howl' and even now all these years later it still has humpf. Not bad for a beat poet. Let the Dopedsickkid do his thing. I'll pass on it and come back when he's made the big time.

 

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Hey what's that word....ohh I know, opinion!

 

JosephO- the demands of pen and paper- that the two be conjoined in a simple marriage of effect and clarity. Poetry is, if anything, the clearest, cleanest expression of human experience. It's not prose or any imitation of it. It's not overstatement, verbal embroidery or lecture. It's the ultimate form of writing- if it's done well. Okay, suggestions for DSK- get rid of those adjectives. They pollute a poem's lines. Shorten each scan. And pay attention to how the piece flows. Poetry should be a celebration of the human voice and fall easily off the page. It's not hard to do, even for young poets, but they must be praised for meeting their goals. Hmmmm, what are his goals?

Blackie, you've got your head screwed on right. And that's a tough thing for anyone to do these days!

 

Dude you fucking rule! Seriously that is some pretty powerful shit man.Thats like the mindfuck of all times man. I'm a poet too, but I havent got around to sharing it to anyone yet. But all I can say to you is man keep releasing that attitude, angst and just passion man. Thats what i like about your poetry, very passionate keep it up, peace brother.