Death

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dragonangelbiker, Feb 23, 2007.

  1. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    bring me down from the high im on
    calm my soul,sing me a song
    take away my tension,becuse there is alot there
    im sorry if i ever cry, my mind is not aware
    im on a cload,its floating away
    bring me down,let me stay
    please dont be sad when my soul dies
    it is part of life,i dont know why
    screaming inside as you slowly drift away
    would it be unnatural if we both died today
    so sing me a song,take my breath away
    would it be so bad to say,i love you,everyday
     
  2. sexbanshee

    sexbanshee Member

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    Oh wow.....very plutonian (the death references)

    i get you here girl...I am a Scorpio too through and through!!!!

    Excellent!
     
  3. guinea

    guinea Member

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    you know a lot of times people are scared of poems like this and they get the wrong idea, poems are a very theraputic way of dealing with emotions , powerful poem
     
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