Death arrived at my front door

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hawk 256 aldokraas, Jan 23, 2026.

  1. hawk 256 aldokraas

    hawk 256 aldokraas Members

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    Death arrived at my
    Front door today
    I was waiting for a long time
    For that to arrive
    I had pray
    So many months ago
    Telling God
    I am not healthy anymore
    I have bad healthy
    I have bad lungs
    I have to use a
    Oxigen tank
    It is not fun
    People come and pay
    Tribute to me
    They leave flowers
    Cards and teddy bears
    For me
    I been loved by
    My readers
     
  2. Ava Scott

    Ava Scott Members

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    This is very well written. Somber.
     
  3. Toker

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    Man, you have to stop spamming so many websites with your poetry.
     
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  4. iowaguy51

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    what other places does he write at?
     
  5. Toker

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    Every poetry site in existence. He found this forum cause it's Poetry.
    He even has his own site, I think.

    It's ok I suppose since it's at least readable and often very good. I've known many poets and lived and worked with several. It's difficult enough to get people to read poetry. So I don't fault him too much for spamming.

    However I feel for all those great poets who are too afraid or too shy to publish their work.
     
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  6. iowaguy51

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    Thank you for your answer.
     
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